孤独的人永远不孤独
又在深夜听《In my place》,又一遍遍感受歌曲中近乎偏执的执着，偏执的旋律和Chris如泣如诉的歌声，仿佛一把锋利的刀刺中你心中最柔软的痛楚，又像是一把重重的锤子，一遍遍的敲击你的胸膛，接连不断的冲击让你仿佛憋气般的缓慢呼吸，它让你沉醉，也让你焦虑，每一次涌动的情绪似乎都要涨破你的身体，就像你是一只装满水的瓶子，你急切的想要把全部的爱和全部的你倾倒出去，却找不到出口，而当你真的把自己颠倒过来，却发现，你的情感早已超脱了地心引力
网上翻译的《In my place》都是直译，或者太过生硬，自己翻译一下。细细的体会下，其实这些词完全有着诗的意境，所以，我没有按照原文翻译，更多的关注词中传递的情感和情绪，并且调整了翻译后中文的结构和韵脚，并且做了适当的删减，让他跟诗更接近，我只能说，英国人果然比美国人更懂英语，也更有底蕴
《In my place》
In my place, in my place
Were lines that I couldn't change
I was lost, oh yeah
I was lost, I was lost
Crossed lines I shouldn't have crossed
I was lost, oh yeah
Yeah, how long must you wait for it?
Yeah, how long must you pay for it?
Yeah, how long must you wait for it?
For it
I was scared, I was scared
Tired and under-prepared
But I'll wait for it
And if you go, if you go
Leave me down here on my own
Then I'll wait for you, yeah
Yeah, how long must you wait for it?
Yeah, how long must you pay for it?
Yeah, how long must you wait for it?
For it
Singing please, please, please
Come back and sing to me
To me, me
Come on and sing it out,now,now
Come on and sing it out to me,me
Come back and sing it
In my place, in my place
Were lines that I couldn't change
I was lost, oh yeah
Oh yeah
在我的世界里
都是我无法改变的轨迹
我已迷失
当我越过了我不应越过的距离
到底你还要等多久
到底你还要付出多久
肉体的煎熬和内心的忐忑
使我感到恐惧
但是，我仍然矢志不渝
即便你要离开
并让我自生自灭
我也一样会等着你
只是，你还要为它等多久
只是，你还要为它付出多久
唱支歌吧，我只能恳求你
带着你的歌声回来
我不要再与别人分享你
现在就回来吧，我渴望你的歌声
现在就回来吧，只让我一个人拥有你
当我的世界里
都是我无法改变的轨迹
我已迷失
网上翻译的《In my place》都是直译，或者太过生硬，自己翻译一下。细细的体会下，其实这些词完全有着诗的意境，所以，我没有按照原文翻译，更多的关注词中传递的情感和情绪，并且调整了翻译后中文的结构和韵脚，并且做了适当的删减，让他跟诗更接近，我只能说，英国人果然比美国人更懂英语，也更有底蕴
《In my place》
In my place, in my place
Were lines that I couldn't change
I was lost, oh yeah
I was lost, I was lost
Crossed lines I shouldn't have crossed
I was lost, oh yeah
Yeah, how long must you wait for it?
Yeah, how long must you pay for it?
Yeah, how long must you wait for it?
For it
I was scared, I was scared
Tired and under-prepared
But I'll wait for it
And if you go, if you go
Leave me down here on my own
Then I'll wait for you, yeah
Yeah, how long must you wait for it?
Yeah, how long must you pay for it?
Yeah, how long must you wait for it?
For it
Singing please, please, please
Come back and sing to me
To me, me
Come on and sing it out,now,now
Come on and sing it out to me,me
Come back and sing it
In my place, in my place
Were lines that I couldn't change
I was lost, oh yeah
Oh yeah
在我的世界里
都是我无法改变的轨迹
我已迷失
当我越过了我不应越过的距离
到底你还要等多久
到底你还要付出多久
肉体的煎熬和内心的忐忑
使我感到恐惧
但是，我仍然矢志不渝
即便你要离开
并让我自生自灭
我也一样会等着你
只是，你还要为它等多久
只是，你还要为它付出多久
唱支歌吧，我只能恳求你
带着你的歌声回来
我不要再与别人分享你
现在就回来吧，我渴望你的歌声
现在就回来吧，只让我一个人拥有你
当我的世界里
都是我无法改变的轨迹
我已迷失
