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老师们都下课了 战战兢兢地自翻自炒 昨天的英语课 充分暴露了我的小学6年级英语 老师“what is chinese's custome in first date？”——我“men pay” 老师“how about your first date？”——我“Happy” ——————————离题了———————————————— Rice-shop rain involved the south in Marth You sit in your empty rice-shop Apple in one hand ，the other is fate You are looking for the smell you own People hurry on out of the windows looking around on the wet road You dance in a empty roon Time leave with Cigarette My lover，Can’t you feeling tomorrow is conming？ a boat berthing on the dock I will clean my hear and climb up the mask Then，to build a house even it may be so fragile like grape’s leaflet ———————————————————————— 米店 三月的烟雨飘摇的南方 你坐在你空空的米店 你一手拿着苹果一手拿着命运 在寻找你自己的香 窗外的人们匆匆忙忙 把眼光丢在潮湿的路上 你的舞步划过空空的房间 时光就变成了烟 爱人，你可感到明天已经来临 码头上停着我们的船 我会洗干净头发爬上桅杆 撑起我们葡萄枝嫩叶般的家

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资深原创音乐人AJ先生（音乐人主页：http://www.douban.com/artist/ten.m2/）看了译文以后表示出极大疑惑 认为意境未能传达 有些沮丧 但转念一想 左右玩玩而已 ——美好药店 《停不住》 我不爱这首歌 却觉得“当你把我推下山 我微笑着闭上了眼”是有够贱格的 Can’t stop Can’t stop ，get nothing Three lights and three shadows When you push her down the mountain I close my eyes helplessly The very night no words in the song tears run out of the hair Can’t stop singing ，can’t get happiness even brande shadows you and me When you push me down the mountain I close my eyes with smile, Through twelve streets I forget all the faces 停不住 停不住 脚步 也得不到什么 三盏路灯 就有三个影子 当你把她推下山 我无力的闭上眼 那夜晚歌里没有词 发丝没网住泪 停不住 歌唱 也 得不到 幸福 即使烙下 我和你的影子 当你把我推下山 我微笑着闭上眼 穿过十二条街道 我忘记了所有的脸

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恩 很爱这件自娱自乐的事 今天翻兰州市市歌《两只山羊》时，得到了奔波在南锣与机场的英文老师米老师的大力支持，和仙女老师不一样的是，在昨晚我荒腔走板的唱了一半《小莉》英文版以后，米老师很尽责的以“押韵”为目标 力争有一天，我能完整地唱出英文版来，这是什么样的情操？ 所以，《两只山羊》没有翻译成 two goats 或 one goat and another One and another goats One and another goats ，climbing up the hill One and another girls ，waving hands to me I want to go there ，but dogs are barking at me If I don’t ，it bothers me Hearing water flowing next the door a sweet girl is showering behind the wall I want to go there ，but the door is locked If I don’t，it bothers me Flowers blooming on the green hillside a sweet girl waiting for me I want to go there ，but need to rehearse If I don’t ，it bothers me I want to go there，but dogs are barking at me If I don’t ，it bothers me I want to go there ，but the door is locked If I don’t，it bothers me ———————————————————————————— 两只山羊 两只山羊嘛 爬山着嘞 两个姑娘嘛 招手着嘞 我想过去嘛 那狗叫着嘞 我不过去嘛 我的心痒着嘞 听见隔壁子嘛 水响着嘞 一个丫头子嘛 洗澡着嘞 我想过去嘛 那门锁着嘞 我不过去嘛 我的心痒着嘞 青白白的山坡子上花开着嘞 一个丫头子 等我着嘞 我想过去嘛 还要排练嘞 我不过去嘛 我的心痒着嘞　　 我想过去嘛 可是狗叫着嘞 我不过去嘛 我的心痒着嘞 我想过去嘛 那门锁着嘞 我不过去嘛 我的心痒着嘞

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睡觉前听了下左小，梦到自己把《小莉》翻译成英文念给外国友人听：if I kiss you you smile i will kiss you 告诉仙女，说我们把这个梦做完吧。 最难的是“小莉”的翻法，若是叫 xiao li，就很容易沦为Li lei and Han meimei 之流，所以还是遵循了做梦大神的指引“lily” LILY if I kiss you you smile i will kiss you lily ，who loves you more than i do？ I really want to kiss you for many hours or when I arrive in south，far away from you My heart break out at the thought My heart break out at the thought if I kiss you you smile i will kiss you lily ，who loves you more than i do？ He is fearless of I blow laid his head open? But law is terrible thing My heart break out at the thought My heart break out at the thought The sad sunshine pouring upon me only you know my feeling if I can use of the time I will talk out all the sweet sentence to her if I kiss you you smile i will kiss you lily ，who loves you more than i do？ I really want to kiss you for many hours or when I arrive in south，far away from you My heart break out at the thought My heart break out at the thought lily，I want to be your dumb bunny you are the sunglow in my heart lily，thanks for lending me money thanks for lending me money，lily lily，I want to be your dumb bunny you are the sunglow in my heart lily lily lily lily “如果我能利用现在的时光 会把我对她说的情话说光”，也是一个中西文化差异的难点 我直译成“if I can use of the time I will talk out all the sweet sentence to her“ 应该有更好的吧？

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