原文:http://www.douban.com/note/99062501/
If you want a lover
I'll do anything you ask me to
And if you want another kind of love
I'll wear a mask for you
If you want a partner
Take my hand
Or if you want to strike me down in anger[1]
Here I stand
I'm your man
If you want a boxer
I...(1回应)
原文:http://www.douban.com/note/99062501/
If you want a lover
I'll do anything you ask me to
And if you want another kind of love
I'll wear a mask for you
If you want a partner
Take my hand
Or if you want to strike me down in anger[1]
Here I stand
I'm your man
If you want a boxer
I will step into the ring for you
And if you want a doctor
I'll examine every inch of you
If you want a driver
Climb inside
Or if you want to take me for a ride
You know you can
I'm your man
Ah, the moon's too bright
The chain's too tight
The beast won't go to sleep [2]
I've been running through these promises to you
That I made and I could not keep
Ah but a man never got a woman back
Not by begging on his knees
Or I'd crawl to you baby
And I'd fall at your feet
And I'd howl at your beauty
Like a dog in heat[3]
And I'd claw at your heart
And I'd tear at your sheet
I'd say please, please
I'm your man
And if you've got to sleep
A moment on the road
I will steer for you
And if you want to work the street alone[4]
I'll disappear for you
If you want a father for your child
Or only want to walk with me a while
Across the sand[5]
I'm your man[6]
If you want a lover
I'll do anything you ask me to
And if you want another kind of love
I'll wear a mask for you
Footnotes:
[1]"Good. I can feel your anger. I am defenseless. Take your weapon. Strike me down with all of your hatred, and your journey towards the dark side will be complete."
--- Palpatine, to Luke Skywalker
[2]1.The Beast is a figure in the Book of Revelation, the last book of the New Testament. There are two beasts described in Revelation 13; the First Beast arises out of the sea, having seven heads and 10 horns. The Second (Lamb-like) Beast arises out of the earth, having the appearance of a lamb while speaking like adragon. This Beast exercises authority on behalf of the first beast, causing the Earth-dwellers to make an image of the First Beast, and worship him. It is able to give life to this image so that it could speak and kill anyone who doesn't worship the First Beast. This Beast is later called “The False Prophet” (Rev. 16:13; Rev. 19:20; Rev. 20:10). In Christian eschatology the Beast together with the Dragon (Satan) and the First Beast (the Antichrist) forms the unholy trinity.
---Wiki Term:The Beast(Bible)
2.记得X-Men(里面的The Beast首次出现于Stan Lee 1963年的小说中)里面的Logan(Wolverine)就总是在月明的时候兽性大发.类似于吸血鬼和中国的僵尸的变身.具体是不是取材于希腊神话?
[3](simile)very energetic and enthusiastic,especially when sexually aroused
[4]查阅了一下,似乎没有"work a street"这个用法.原本以为是发音造成的误解.可cohen官网上确实是'work'.姑且存疑.
[5]开始查字典,看到只有sands才沙漠之意,但好像大家都把这里的'sand'译成'沙漠'.我还在Wiki查到'Sand City",但Cohen官网 'sand'为小写.暂时仍翻为'沙漠'.
[6]关于标题句,大多人都在翻译时通篇译成'我是你的男人',这里尝试另外一种译法,虽然在这段发现不能保持整个翻译的对应统一,我还是坚持不动前三段,因为自己感觉会更贴紧诗歌原本的感情.
试译:关于标题句,大多人都在翻译时通篇译成'我是你的男人',这里尝试另外一种译法,虽然在这段发现不能保持整个翻译的对应统一,我还是坚持不动前三段,因为自己感觉会更贴紧诗歌原本的感情.
试译:若你想要个情人
我愿任凭你差遣
若你想换种爱的方式
我愿为你戴上假面
若你想找个知己
牵着我的手
又或者你气得想狠狠揍我
我就站这儿
谁叫我是你的人呢
若你想找个拳手
我愿为你步入擂台
若你想找医生
我愿检查你的每一寸
若你想要个司机
那就上车
又或者你想带我兜一圈呢
你知道你可以的
谁叫我是你的人呢
啊,月光太亮
镣铐太牢
野兽不肯睡去
我反复诉说那些对你许下
却不能实现的诺言
但男人若不跪着哀求
永远也不能唤回女人
我会爬到你面前,亲爱的
我会跪倒在你脚下
我会大声哀号你的美丽
像只发情的狗
我会抓挠你的感情
我会撕咬你的床单
我会说,求求你,求求你
谁叫我是你的人呢
若你在路上
想睡一会
我会为你把着方向盘
若你想一个人上街
我会消失在你面前
若你想给孩子找个父亲
哪怕只是想和我走走
穿过沙漠
我是你的男人
若你想要个情人
我愿做你希望的任何事
若你想换种爱的方式
我愿为你戴上假面
I'm Your Man试译
原文:http://www.douban.com/note/99062501/ If you want a lover I'll do anything you ask me to And if you want another kind of love I'll wear a mask for you If you want a partner Take my hand Or if you want to strike me down in anger[1] Here I stand I'm your man If you want a boxer I...(1回应)
原文:http://www.douban.com/note/99062501/ If you want a lover I'll do anything you ask me to And if you want another kind of love I'll wear a mask for you If you want a partner Take my hand Or if you want to strike me down in anger[1] Here I stand I'm your man If you want a boxer I will step into the ring for you And if you want a doctor I'll examine every inch of you If you want a driver Climb inside Or if you want to take me for a ride You know you can I'm your man Ah, the moon's too bright The chain's too tight The beast won't go to sleep [2] I've been running through these promises to you That I made and I could not keep Ah but a man never got a woman back Not by begging on his knees Or I'd crawl to you baby And I'd fall at your feet And I'd howl at your beauty Like a dog in heat[3] And I'd claw at your heart And I'd tear at your sheet I'd say please, please I'm your man And if you've got to sleep A moment on the road I will steer for you And if you want to work the street alone[4] I'll disappear for you If you want a father for your child Or only want to walk with me a while Across the sand[5] I'm your man[6] If you want a lover I'll do anything you ask me to And if you want another kind of love I'll wear a mask for you Footnotes: [1]"Good. I can feel your anger. I am defenseless. Take your weapon. Strike me down with all of your hatred, and your journey towards the dark side will be complete." --- Palpatine, to Luke Skywalker [2]1.The Beast is a figure in the Book of Revelation, the last book of the New Testament. There are two beasts described in Revelation 13; the First Beast arises out of the sea, having seven heads and 10 horns. The Second (Lamb-like) Beast arises out of the earth, having the appearance of a lamb while speaking like adragon. This Beast exercises authority on behalf of the first beast, causing the Earth-dwellers to make an image of the First Beast, and worship him. It is able to give life to this image so that it could speak and kill anyone who doesn't worship the First Beast. This Beast is later called “The False Prophet” (Rev. 16:13; Rev. 19:20; Rev. 20:10). In Christian eschatology the Beast together with the Dragon (Satan) and the First Beast (the Antichrist) forms the unholy trinity. ---Wiki Term:The Beast(Bible) 2.记得X-Men(里面的The Beast首次出现于Stan Lee 1963年的小说中)里面的Logan(Wolverine)就总是在月明的时候兽性大发.类似于吸血鬼和中国的僵尸的变身.具体是不是取材于希腊神话? [3](simile)very energetic and enthusiastic,especially when sexually aroused [4]查阅了一下,似乎没有"work a street"这个用法.原本以为是发音造成的误解.可cohen官网上确实是'work'.姑且存疑. [5]开始查字典,看到只有sands才沙漠之意,但好像大家都把这里的'sand'译成'沙漠'.我还在Wiki查到'Sand City",但Cohen官网 'sand'为小写.暂时仍翻为'沙漠'. [6]关于标题句,大多人都在翻译时通篇译成'我是你的男人',这里尝试另外一种译法,虽然在这段发现不能保持整个翻译的对应统一,我还是坚持不动前三段,因为自己感觉会更贴紧诗歌原本的感情. 试译:关于标题句,大多人都在翻译时通篇译成'我是你的男人',这里尝试另外一种译法,虽然在这段发现不能保持整个翻译的对应统一,我还是坚持不动前三段,因为自己感觉会更贴紧诗歌原本的感情. 试译:若你想要个情人 我愿任凭你差遣 若你想换种爱的方式 我愿为你戴上假面 若你想找个知己 牵着我的手 又或者你气得想狠狠揍我 我就站这儿 谁叫我是你的人呢 若你想找个拳手 我愿为你步入擂台 若你想找医生 我愿检查你的每一寸 若你想要个司机 那就上车 又或者你想带我兜一圈呢 你知道你可以的 谁叫我是你的人呢 啊,月光太亮 镣铐太牢 野兽不肯睡去 我反复诉说那些对你许下 却不能实现的诺言 但男人若不跪着哀求 永远也不能唤回女人 我会爬到你面前,亲爱的 我会跪倒在你脚下 我会大声哀号你的美丽 像只发情的狗 我会抓挠你的感情 我会撕咬你的床单 我会说,求求你,求求你 谁叫我是你的人呢 若你在路上 想睡一会 我会为你把着方向盘 若你想一个人上街 我会消失在你面前 若你想给孩子找个父亲 哪怕只是想和我走走 穿过沙漠 我是你的男人 若你想要个情人 我愿做你希望的任何事 若你想换种爱的方式 我愿为你戴上假面
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